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I apologize for the page before this :loopyfists.deviantart.com/art/…

These two pages symbolize the first fanfiction that i had ever written for fanfic.net.

It also symbolizes the day that I had thought up one of my favorite ships on this site, and...

after near 11,000 views on my site, I thought it was best that everyone knows how I thought it up.

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It was basically a hate fic signed directly to Bleedman because I was an angsty young teen who saw Grim Tales as horrible. 

But I wanted to do something different. Different than all the other GT hate fics. I wanted to show them how dark a world would be like if Bleedman's GT dreams came true.

All of the hate and destruction, but written 'in character' enough to be far more believable that Bleed's work.

It starred Billy as the main character, being the Horsemen of War, accounting he and his friends rise to power, and his growth from stupidity to sentience.

I am in no way proud of what I decidedly wrote for his "training", his decent into madness and basically the whole fic in general.

All except this scene.

It was...pure. Or at least a kind, hopeful spot for a better ending. 

I never finished the fanfic.

I had all of the story planned out for an alright, if bittersweet ending.

But this scene made me keep changing and changing the story over and over until finally I dropped it altogether.

It's probably for the best, but I wanted to keep that one thing, even if that whole story was erased.

It made me stop writing a very horrible fanfic, and sometimes just brightens my day when I see a pic or two.

I dunno if I'm getting to into this or not but, I thought it was for the best that everyone knew how it came to my mind.

As horrible as it's birth was, at least it's the only thing I don't regret creating in the story.

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There's no dialouge to this one, because I kept changing it over and over.

Just make some up if you want.

Or not, doesn't matter. I'm just going to enjoy the calmness of it.

And maybe redraw it one day.


 
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Dicard's avatar
wow, so you were going to add your shipping of Bubbles and Nergal Jr. to the fic?

And what your comment,  sure explain a lot of the OOC violence (or more extremely than the one in the show) of the main characters.